Below is a story I wrote about my mother and published in my weekly newspaper column. After reading it in the paper, she scolded me: "People are going to think I have roaches in my house!"
The story is true. She did have a roach in her house. I told her that everyone who lives in Georgia has had a roach in the house. Anyone who pretends she hasn't can't be trusted.
Besides, her worry about what people will think is severely misplaced. She should really be concerned that now they know she's hording VHS tapes in her closet!
The story is true. She did have a roach in her house. I told her that everyone who lives in Georgia has had a roach in the house. Anyone who pretends she hasn't can't be trusted.
Besides, her worry about what people will think is severely misplaced. She should really be concerned that now they know she's hording VHS tapes in her closet!
Shall We Waltz, Madame?
As if it was not enough to slip
and fall – THUNK! – hitting her head on a chair on the way down, the body
was missing. When my mama skidded across the slick of Raid sprayed liberally
the night before by her own hand, she noted to herself on the way to the floor
that the greasy, hip-breaking film was the only evidence of the assault that
occurred a brief eight hours earlier. An intruder had surprised her in the
kitchen.
My daddy heard the thud and found my mother sprawled in a dazed heap,
reviewing the events of the previous evening, paranoid that her vulnerability
would draw out the vile creature. She clearly remembered startling and
side-stepping and letting out a choked yelp of horror. It had been no figment
of her imagination. She had snatched the can of poison from the cabinet beneath
the sink and let loose with it before retreating at Olympic speed-walker pace.
All of that said, there are
worse things than a missing corpse.
My mama, feeling generally defeated, hobbled to the bedroom to prepare
for her day. There! At the foot of the bed! The intruder poised in an unsteady,
unpredictable pause of zig-zagging, giving off the aura of brazen defiance
coupled with triumph, and perhaps even an invitation to awkwardly waltz.
Without hesitation she put her left foot on top of it with exacted pressure,
pinning it down without squishing the life out of it, because she simply has no
stomach for such ghastly scenes.
Maintaining her precision perfect stance, she waited for my father, who,
ignorant of her predicament, busied himself piddling around the yard. All alone
in this precarious circumstance with the unwelcome visitor, her posture
faltering, she searched her options. If she let up, her tormenter would surely
make a break for better ground. So she waited, confident my father would soon
rescue her as he’d done when she wallowed unbecomingly in the residue of last
night’s disturbance. He would valiantly collect the crawler and scuttle it into
the toilet. Flush.
The strain in her legs neared unbearable, as did the idea that the day
was getting away while she minded her prisoner. As time passed, it became
painfully apparent that even though she put her foot down, the revolting
specter beneath it still held all the power. From its pressed position, it
rendered her helpless and immobile. Pivoting, carefully, she positioned herself
to sit on the bed.
Determined to arise from this trauma unscathed, however, she surveyed her
surroundings. An extensive collection of VHS tapes peeked out from the closet.
As if steered by God to give testimony to the indefatigable argument that He
has a purpose for all things, she rose and began a slow pivot to angle her
right arm toward the closet while keeping her left foot securely atop the
intruder. Sssstrrrrreeeeeeeetch, she reached and grabbed a short stack of
tapes. Wiggling and waggling on her free foot with renewed hope, she returned
to her seat on the bed.
Implementing the strategic second-stage attack on the adversary depended
on elemental swiftness. Having put her foot down for so long, she now lifted it
and . . . abruptly ceased the descent of the of VHS tapes to the back of the interloper.
As if it was not enough to slip and fall – THUNK! – hitting her head on a chair,
the body had cracked and oozed. The palmetto bug, to my mother’s
horror, grotesquely reclined, victorious in a pool of its own spoils.
When my
mother puts her foot down on me for publicly romanticizing this morbid dance of
death, I will not fare as well as the wretched roach. I do not possess its winning
personality.
(Lucy Adams is the author of Tuck Your Skirt in Your Panties and Run. She lives in Thomson, GA. Email Lucy
at lucybgoosey@aol.com and
visit her web site, www.IfMama.com.)
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